Comments : Bad Santa

  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi Darren,

    This made me smile. I can imagine Santa the next day opening bleary eyes, seeing strewn ladies underwear and discarded bottles. Oh, and nursing the hangover from hell.

    A funny write.

    Take care,


  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A break from the "fallen angel" series today Darren so I could have a look at this great little senryu. It certainly raised a smile and brought to mind memories of a funny film of the same title staring Billy Bob Thornton.

    All the very best,

  • 2 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is so sad. What a memory for a child to have.
    Great job!
    Take care

  • 2 years ago


    Your poem made me laugh Darren, but shouldn't it of been 'purple pants' and not red?! lol!

    Seriously, a short but true poem.
    I loved the line 'goodwill lost in gin.'
    These words so true come Christmas!