Comments : Closed book

  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Melissa,

    I like this poem. I especially like the bear simille. To me it made me smile thinking of a loving lump who has a prickly sensitive side. I realse the message is a sad one: past pain causing fear of a repeat so a necessary defence is erected.

    Melissa I like your writing alot. It has depth of experience which lends to moody musing.

    Take care,


  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Some wonderful use of metaphor throughout the whole of this piece; well done.

    Take care,