Comments : No Children

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    Liz
    What a sad heartbreaking piece.
    Take care of yourself.
    Love Cindy

  • 1 year ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    OMG Liz:(

    I know what this is about and I am having goose bumps all over!
    Know this: they never, I repeat never get away with it, God does punish, I have seen it with my own eyes more than once.

    He took your past, don't let him take your present and your future. The best way to overcome this, is to let the memories go and move on. He is not worth to spend another second on.
    Allow your wounds to heal and grant yourself the life you can have, a life free of pain.

    Look up The Work by Byron Katie and also on YouTube seminars by dr Wayne Dyer. Lots of their knowledge is for free and a big help to overcome a haunting past.

    Love always,
    Ingrid xx

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    this is indeed heartbreaking. What happens when you treat children, in fact any human in an inhumane way? They become sponges that absorb the nastiness. When this continues the sponges become non human, just a damaged vessel that can only sink.

    A great write that has so much to say. Well done!!

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by silvershoes

    I love a poem that clicks for me at the end. Suddenly it all makes sense and ties together and I have to read the whole thing over again with new appreciation and understanding. Beautiful write.

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    Congratulations on your win Liz.
    I knew this was a winner when I read it.
    Take care
    Love
    Cindy

  • 1 year ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Congratulations on your win dear Liz.

    Did read it long time back but just couldn't comment then.

    Really loved everything abt this one.
    Very painful but the way you portrayed the picture...simply outstanding.

    Well deserved win :)

    all the best and take care

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging comment

    Poetess paints such a sad poem this week, in true creative form and style. I was so touched when I read this. the angle she took with this was very unique. I was blown away!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Wow very powerful. I was captured from start to finish so heart wrenching and the meaning so sad 😢

  • 1 year ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wawo
    Very nice lots meaning in this poems.
    Empty vessels with hole....................
    great.............