Comments : Fly On.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautifully penned piece of work and one full of a brave sort of hope! I love the bitter herb simile, by the way!
    Nominated.
    Well written and all the best,
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Nice work indeed, Poet on the piano!
    A thought provoking piece, well warranting several reads. Loved it!

  • 1 year ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, inspiring words Guinea Pig!

    I think this is such a good message of hope, that faith can carry you, and inspire you to be strong when you don't believe you can be.

    I like how you show you used to believe one thing, that going in one direction was the only way you could possibly go, but then when it fails to succeed, this is where you are at, and you get an idea that perhaps there is another way, and this way will be the road that saves you.

    Running away
    and denying my
    footprints will only
    leave me like a
    bitter herb.

    - very unique term used here, and it worked perfectly!
    I love the tone of realisation here, and how you know this is not an option.

    Uplifting piece, thanks!