Comments : Unforgetable you

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Noor,

    The past is symbolised well here with your castle reference.

    Agood write.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful write.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Noor,

    This really is a thoroughly emotional and moving little piece of poetry from you.
    All the best and take care,
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Beautiful words Noor, simply beautiful!
    Loved this!

  • 1 year ago

    by Shah

    Very cute words....

    When a little lost girl
    Found a piece of heaven
    In your arms

    yes you are right here, the feeling of real love is not less than heaven

  • 1 year ago

    by Amit Mudgal

    Hello Noor

    Wonderful written , Keep it up

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Noor,

    What a beautiful piece. It is always hard to 'forget' someone that meant so much to you. I can feel the emotion in this piece.

    Em