Comments : Take my bones.

  • 1 year ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    I liked this! Says it 'how it is!'
    Time for a change!!
    Well penned Poet on the Piano.

  • 1 year ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I love the honesty of this piece, and also how you have shortened the title, but also let us know the real title. It is a powerful line, but that is sometimes just how it is, how it feels, and it is what crushes us into the hopeless darkness.

    But thus, is also what can sometimes push us to make a change, to demand from ourselves something new, so we can become unstuck in the place we are in.

    I like how you repeated this (this) much... I could actually envision your arms doing the actions to show the amount, and also could hear the emphasis on your tone. Nicely done!