Comments : When I was a Leaf

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a brilliant story of a leaf's journey! And your descriptive prowess is evidenced here; the imagery is simply sumptious!

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow. Andrea this is so beautiful. I have a passion for trees and it is amazing to watch. Trees come in so many different shapes, sizes and colors down to the branches and leafes, but it's the healthy trunk making the tree standing strong. Take care and be blessed.

  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Andrea,

    this is a beautiful 'full circle' poem. I had to stifle a laugh as the fallen leaf landed up on a shoe. But, the last laugh is on me for he became compost and then became absorbed into a future tree. Now that is what I call a happy ending.

    Well done, a lovely write.

    Take care,


  • 2 years ago

    by shadowcat

    Omg amazing!

    I almost felt as if I was a leaf myself when reading this