Comments : My Illness

  • 1 year ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    This is great poetry Beautiful Chaos, the like I've not seen before.
    You have a real magic with words!

    Yes Love. That mysterious force that keeps us all addicted to living, it entices us all until we surrender to its charms, but then, quick as a flash, it can disappear forever, leaving battered and confused souls in its wake.

    Well penned! (Nominated)

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I have to agree with Peter

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Wow, this is good and got me thinking. Great images throughout. I too have to agree with Peter, this is poetry that I haven't seen in sometime. I used to turn my head up at theses sorts of things because I never got them but the more and more I read this kid of stuff the more I like it. I just wish I could write more like this instead of rhyming stuff. You have really inspired me to try.

    Love: Can mend or break us.

    Em