Comments : On The Banks Of Time

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    So deep, so beautiful

  • 2 years ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Such beauty and depth to this poem - have read it three times now and still I see something new

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    I have many words to say but they just won't come as the beauty and depth of this poem has captivated every ounce of my being.
    I love the last 4 lines

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful imagery for such a very deep poem. You are a truly talented writer. This is excellent.

  • 1 year ago

    by Lucifer

    From Start till the end, I never felt disconnected. I think the last two lines says you will live as a ghost for the rest of the time.
    Powerful write, mihir.

    • 1 year ago

      by Mihir Deshmukh

      Thank you so much Lucifer for taking the time to read my work and appreciating it.