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So deep, so beautiful
by Mihir Deshmukh
Such beauty and depth to this poem - have read it three times now and still I see something new
I have many words to say but they just won't come as the beauty and depth of this poem has captivated every ounce of my being.
I love the last 4 lines
Beautiful imagery for such a very deep poem. You are a truly talented writer. This is excellent.
From Start till the end, I never felt disconnected. I think the last two lines says you will live as a ghost for the rest of the time.
Powerful write, mihir.
Thank you so much Lucifer for taking the time to read my work and appreciating it.