Comments : Bastard child - The slam edition

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Your first one was awesome, this one, even better. So much hurt coming from these words. A very telling write about infidelity and the fall out from it.

  • 2 years ago

    by J Nair

    Dear Yakari,

    I believe your poems heal you! and inspires others.

    The words in the poem so strongly reinstates the fact that how someone's casual outlook at life becomes lifetime's pain for those who are at the receiving end of such a raw deal.

    You have turned your pain into your strength.
    Best wishes to a brave soul.


  • 2 years ago

    by Em


    This piece is so full of raw emotion. It's inspiring to the reader.
    It's factual of how this is happening to many other women and men around the world, distance between fathers and mothers alike and the pain the people it's happening to feel.

    I feel this is written well be wise the emotion you feel inside has turned you around.

    Take care, Em.

  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy


    This is a wonderful piece of slam poetry. It is inspiring and touches all the right parts in all the right places.

    Take care,


  • 1 year ago


    A thought provoking poem Yakari, full of raw emotion and pain. A good write.