Comments : Finally free

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Wow! This is really dark and intense! Extreme vivid imagery.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Christy

    I'll make a couple of points about this piece, both positive and negative. I'll get the bad out the way first!
    This isn't a pleasing write for me to read personally, simply because I am aware how much you are and have been suffering recently - indeed, for a while now, so it upsets me to think you are feeling this low.
    As far as the actual poem is concerned, I always quite like these unpolished little writes as they come from the heart which is what poetry is all about.
    What was most hard-hitting was the acknowledgement of the joy felt when cutting so deep and feeling such pain - more joy, perhaps, than had been felt before.

    Keep your head up Christy and pm me whenever,

    All the very best
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is very deep and straight coming from the heart. Cutting is a type of self mutilating that supposedly help dealing with the pain. It's heartbreaking. Take care of yourself and be blessed. People do love you.

    • Thank you im doing alot better since i wrote this poem i was going through a dark time an still trying to deal with a family loss but things are looking up an im starting to feel alot better :)