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by Ben Pickard
What a beautiful little poem from you that is both a pleasure to read and has a wonderful, calming rhythm to it.
All I would suggest is dropping the 'of' in the last line; I'm not sure it's necessary and it would flow better without it -your choice though, of course.
Either way, this is lovely.
Take care and all the best,
This is just beautiful! How wonderful to have someone that special in your life that brings you sunshine not grief. Lovely write!
It's so good to see you happy Jenni...I'm glad your patience and perseverance finally paid off for you. Keeps smiling girl...you definitely deserve this happiness.
Jenni, this is truly beautiful.
Goes to show what real life an do, it brings us out of that dark place we thought we'd be forever and makes us love ourselves again.