Comments : You need Courage

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    In the last line, I believe "then" is supposed to be "than".

    Otherwise, a wonderful piece!

    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Meena, how very true that is! Not everybody has the courage to be truthful or stand up for what they truly believe. Well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    What a beautiful personification of Honesty and Courage. Thanks for sharing!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Meena, another powerful and inspirational write. It's true we need courage to be honest because sometimes the truth hurts but it's better than lying through our teeth to make someone happy because eventually they'll realise the lies and be unhappy anyway.

    'and appreciated'
    ^^
    I think the word 'be' is missing here from the middle.

    All the best, Em

  • 1 year ago

    by William Mae

    I love this write Meena, our inner soul is revealed only to the heart who owns it. If it shines or when it shines will only be when the owner of it desires to reveal it. The truth will and always changes every perception of reality. The owner of the the souls truth is also it's gate keeper, and only they control its ability to breathe. I love this poem