Hello

This is an excellently rhymed and inspirational little piece. The scars that mark us - metaphorically or otherwise - are just that: scars. They do not have to hold negative sway in our lives - in fact, quite the contrary. If we suffer them and survive them, we are stronger because of them.

Well written,

SL

Very powerful write and the truth so well spoken. Scars of any kind become manageable in time and it does not define us. Life goes on and letting go to me was the key. Thank you for sharing. Take care. Add to my favorite

Beautiful and very true

The rhyming is wonderful and the message powerful.

The only thing I can think of is because of the rhyming scheme the end part threw me off abit so I have a suggestion:

Instead of are the same change it to live another day as it still means the scars are there and keeps the rhyme.

Fab poem nonetheless and remember its only a suggestion.

Emm