Hello Meena,

a challenging poem, but well executed.

You have portrayed the battle of good vs evil well. I like the King fighting like the days of old, but instead of weapons, his glare is enough to ward off the dark clouds.

Well done and take care,

Michael

Meena,

I have never been less than impressed with people who not only can write such challenging forms but are able to stick to their story in the process and not get side tracked.
I am all for formed poetry, however, I don't believe the form itself should ever be important than the content; you blend the two seamlessly.

SL

Meena, just beautiful! I loved the form and how everything blended so beautifully together to tell an engaging story. Well done-

A excellent write Meena, I love a poem that makes me crave more and more as I read. This is that poem that made me crave more.

I love your poem. It's so beautiful and poetic.
''Tranquil night melts away from earth's embrace" ... you have wonderful concrete imagery and it flows so well. Excellent!

MariVal

Excellent imagery and congrats on effectively completing a difficult form. I really enjoyed the theme and word usage. Thanks for sharing!

As always some wonderful imagery.

Never heard of this form so thanks on the footnote, you did a grand job.
Em