Comments : Depths

  • 10 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Jack,

    Excellent writing; fluent and well rhymed. I have to admit, the third stanza reminded me of the nights I wake up with ideas and find myself running desperately around in the dark looking for a pen and paper before the thoughts escape me. It really can lead to some restless nights!

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben