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I really enjoyed this Hellon
by - Mr. Darcy
Nicely executed. The story is outlined: two ladies brief liason on adjacent travellators. This scene is more about the shared unspoken dialogue. It begs the reader to wonder what the back story is.
Just a suggestion, if the poem faded instead of an end question it would stand alone, whilst still setting up the prequel.
Like this:What was her name I wondered,
as she faded from view...
Just an idea. ;)
I like your idea Michael and I have changed it around....thanks for that :)