Comments : The Park at Night

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Larry all I have for this is it's fantastic!

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Larry, loved this! Your visuals are spot on and I felt like I was right there walking along. Wonderful!

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello, Larry

    this is a remarkable poem. You weave a wonderful yarn, sir.

    • 7 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Thanks guys. Guess I know this park by heart. So many of my poems were written here.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Well done on a definitely, well deserved win Larry

  • 7 years ago

    by Nil

    I love the visuals you paint with your words in this poem.

  • 7 years ago

    by silvershoes

    My dad would walk our family dog, Lou, around 10pm every night before going to bed. They'd go on long, ambling 30 minute walks and had several routes picked out. Sometimes I would go with them. One of the routes took them through the elementary school and baseball field near our house. Our cat, Stinky, would walk with them part way and my dad would carry her in his jacket for the remainder. We have possums, raccoons, skunks, and even turkeys that patrol the neighborhood. A few feral cats, though mostly they have homes I think. Anyway, this poem brought me back to those memories and made me think of the bond between my dad and our dog. Thanks for unintentionally triggering some warm memories :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Thank you for sharing that, Jane. The more I here of your dad the more I think we'd have been good friends.