Super poem containing inner dialogue. I like the presentation of spaced out couplets, they look pleasing to me. Most of all though, I like the end. Here you Stab hard the message of the quiet, shy girl who is actually a tornado of words inside. Much like the eye of a storm!

Well done,

Michael

This sounds like the beginnings of a panic attack/anxiety attack.
I am never good around too many people and always begin to panic when I think I don't have the right words.
Sometimes, I suppose, we should just be stronger and more confident in our own convictions and damn what others think!

Take care

Which you do eloquently indeed. The best writers are always social misfits it seems, lol

I like the flow of sad rain in this sorrowful write. I actually felt the physical pain while I was running through this write. You are quite talented specially with the sad poems. I guess you are describing about some kind of brain problem.

A very well written.
5/5

I suffer from social anxiety as well and I like this piece very much. You have wonderfully captured how it feels. Great job.