Comments : Empty Promises

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The flipside of love. I suppose for every chance there is of happiness and contentment, there is a chance of despair and chaos; a dreadful kind of balance that seems to blight so many of life's highs.

    As sad as this piece is, it is really well written and expressive.

    Take care.

    • 7 years ago

      by The Fallen Angel

      Thank you Ben!! I too believe that there are two sides to every situation, like a sine wave! And there are times when your graph is always negative!! It was one hell of a dreadful day of my life and everything was slipping out of my hands!! Just didn't know what else to do other than write!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Love can keep us in abusive, one sided relationships. Your write really touched on this. Well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by The Fallen Angel

      Thank you for the comments Brenda!! I was overwhelming with emotions while writing this one.

    • 6 years ago

      by The Fallen Angel

      Thank you Brenda