Comments : Love Is An Open Door Poem (A Song)

  • 1 year ago

    by BlueJay

    There is an extremely interesting use of voice in this piece and I really enjoy that fact. Though the form of this is a little bit awkward it was creative and I suppose I can appreciate the beauty in creativity; however, a little more fluidity would make this more songlike to a reader.

    • 1 year ago

      by Abstract Poet

      It is a song did u see where it came from?
      But thank you for commenting on this piece.