Comments : I Miss You

  • 8 months ago

    by Em

    No one is not deserving or anyone, its just sometimes the times wrong and or they are.. Take care.

  • 8 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Not too much to analyse here other than to say I'm sorry that you feel like this but, in my opinion, those who have a negative view of themselves are frequently the most deserving. Great write.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 7 months ago

    by Jamie

    I really like this a lot because i sadly can relate to this all too well. The emotions are well penned and another thing i like is it doesn't feel like an acrostic even though you made it into one, it flows that well to me. The meaning seems to be that the character (maybe the author?). Fell in love too soon and it ended up in heartbreak and now you miss that person dearly.

    The reason i think it was a young person, is because you used naive, which i believe works well here because it adds to the meaning of the poem, and lets the reader create their own meaning to a point. Well done