Comments : Poetic beauty once shared

  • 7 months ago

    by Ren

    WOW...Michael...just...wow! Phenomenal work!

    Nominated!!

  • 7 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh my gawd...Mouth drops!
    You my friend, kicked it!

    This poem is brillantly beautiful!!!

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Oh Andrea, that's such lovely comments. She was a challenge to write about, but fulfilling bliss :)

      Michael

  • 7 months ago

    by BlueJay

    Even though this is a little lengthy, I loved the movement and the voice and the way it didn't feel long at all. I enjoyed the style and way you kept up a solid rhythm and upbeat momentum. Great word choice and interesting uses of syntax every now and then.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you BlueJay
      Your comments mean a lot. And yes I added a little, after posting. And thought I wonder if too long; )

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done on the win, Michael - a super write.
    As for the length, I have to disagree with Bluejay; some of the greatest poems ever written were a damn site lengthier than this. I think it adds a certain ...gravitas to the piece!

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Ben,
      Really nice words to receive on my poetry

      All the best

      Michael

  • 7 months ago

    by Ren

    Yayy!!! Congratulations on the win Michael!! :D

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ren

      Your nomination did it :)

      Michael

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, such a seductive visual write, its quite stunning. Congratulations on your win, a well deserved front page write!

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Hi Brenda

      Thank you that means a lot

      All the best

      Michael

  • 7 months ago

    by Ross Kilbride

    This poem was perfect.

    • 7 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ross

      For your nice comments

      Michael

  • 7 months ago

    by DarkLight

    This issue one beautiful poem, I drawned in your words trying to quencher a thirst brought out by the need to enjoy a good write

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I am actually still speechless after Deep Sea Delving and now this...please this is injustice already. Haha. Ross is right. Perfect.

  • 4 months ago

    by Nicko

    Judging comment

    I found this poem captivating, the poet took me on a wonderful titillating journey full of spice and evocative imagery, excuse the puns. Exquisite word choice adds to the seduction of this lovely piece. A mature well written poem that lifts off the page of its own accord. I admit I would rather the words have the impact as opposed to page layout, but that seems to becoming more favoured these days. Not sure how the page layout translates when you read it out loud ? Yet that’s a very personal thing I guess. But I have to say very LOUDLY "that can not detract in any way from such a great poem!"
    A very warm congrats.