Comments : Let Me Help You

  • 8 months ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful!

    "I want to tell you

    Stop carrying the world on your shoulders
    Letting it weigh you down
    Pushing you lower."

    ^^
    Love these lines! Especially the layout and how you put a space after those first words. It really helps emphasize the next few lines.

    Great job!

  • 2 months ago

    by tayang

    love how you wrote it..