Comments : Let Me Help You

  • 11 months ago

    by Ren


    "I want to tell you

    Stop carrying the world on your shoulders
    Letting it weigh you down
    Pushing you lower."

    Love these lines! Especially the layout and how you put a space after those first words. It really helps emphasize the next few lines.

    Great job!

  • 5 months ago

    by tayang

    love how you wrote it..