Ok, so I didn't expect that end, blown away, cool write though-

Wow. I didn't expect that either, but it was great. I hope this isn't a true story lol it seems traumatizing. Still makes for a good write. I love it!

Tobias, from what I've read of your work so far, you clearly have a very skilled ability to tell a story and make the reader feel like they are there and all the very best tales do that.

Well done and all the best,

Ben

I am expecting the little boy to come across an evidence. And whoa, what an evidence it was. This is a terrible happening and how you narrate the events is admirable.