Comments : You win the game

  • 7 years ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Such a sad and tragic story, but oh so familiar to many.
    You paint a lovely sense of resignation tinged with bitterness.
    PPx

    • 7 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Anger is a very fit emotion for the situation, but I will rise above and beyond that, and even him. I deserve better. He isn't going to control me anymore.

    • 7 years ago

      by Pagan Paul

      You have my best wishes. I hope you do find better :)
      And don't let anyone control you past, present or future.
      PPx

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Such a powerful sadness in your poem. It resonates deeply BT, and I hope you'll write the opposite some day.

    Incredible piece of openness

    Michael x

  • 7 years ago

    by Liz

    Just by you saying he isn't going to control you anymore, is a sign that you're the one winning now. Keep your head up!

  • 6 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    F-******* Heart wrenching.

    • 6 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Awe Ben. I still cry when I reread this one. It was tough to write