Comments : The thief

  • 5 months ago

    by 2luv

    yes. I know this story it is more than a dream the theives take. sometimes it is dinner from your child or a roof over her head while they live lives of excess most of all in my case it is the loss of trust or ability to try again for fear the theives will be back to push you down with their lawyer clowns and say you are delusional you and your child are trash dont come back unless you save more for us to steal.,,,,,i honestly dont understand these people. good poem

  • 5 months ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Nicely penned sentiment Yakari.
    None of us like our words/work stolen. Usually by talentless people.
    PPx

  • 5 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Yakari I really like your voice in this write, the sense of injustice rings throughout the whole piece and I love your layout and flow