Comments : Lately

  • 5 months ago

    by Lvi

    Absolutely love this !

    Wars and violence bring destruction in various forms, affecting even the smallest of things.

    You gripped me with the story.I enjoyed the smooth rhyming throughout as well as the vivid and beautiful descriptions.

    His shadow danced on the wall to the rhythm of a dim candlelight

    ^^
    just one of the many creative lines within the piece, that stood out for me.

    Lvi

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great story, well told and well rhymed; a pleasure to read.

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    A great story creatively penned. I love how the rhymes answer each other until the end. Definitely a great poem.