Comments : Muted melody of love

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael,
    This is a truly wonderful piece and I could pick it apart in terms of what's good about it, but some of the alliteration in this poem is truly sublime.

    Well done and all the best as ever,

    Ben

  • 6 months ago

    by ether

    Beautiful

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      One word says it all Ether and you said it!

      Thank you

  • 6 months ago

    by Phil

    I have no words

  • 6 months ago

    by DarkLight

    We lie with words to ourselves when we claim that no words could explain the expression in our hearts, but I find that only words are as powerful as our expressions...

    This is a lovely poem
    rejuvenating my heart.

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Again Darklight your words mean a lot. I'm pleased your heart is rejuvenated. What a nice feeling :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Em

    how very magical

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em :)