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  • 5 months ago

    by Dewoueld

    Nice the words are sm9th

  • 5 months ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Nicely penned Andrea.
    So much in this society is based on looks and image. Its very shallow.
    PPx

  • 5 months ago

    by Jamie

    Omg i truly love this poem. The message hits home with me because i know what it is like to be judged and be the judgee (shame on me). This poem does come from the heart and soul, and you can tell. Whether it be from personal experience or not. Sad if it was.

    The world more so than ever is full of people who judge people for who they are, what they look like, mental health etc and i think this is what you touched on greatly with your words, also that you've seen a lot of it. The ending is my favorite part because it rings the most truth. In the end it won't matter because we will all die, and i believe that is what most people forget. Why can't there be peace? Sigh. Instead of all this killing. Great write!

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Andrea

    Beautifully written piece :)

    Michael

  • 5 months ago

    by Hope2932

    Oh my gosh Andres this poem is so awsome!!!!! Love the message in it.

  • 5 months ago

    by Poetess

    I don't think anyone could have put this better, Andrea. Life is much more peaceful when we live without constantly judging others.

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben

    Woman, you killed it.

  • 5 months ago

    by BlueJay

    I feel like you've got a couple poems trying to say this, and this one has hit the nail on the head for sure. It's simple but it's got power and voice and still the love that oozes from your soul (not just your poetry). Great write!

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I like this screaming poem! This is great, Ms. Andi!