Milly, a sad write but you really wrote this beautifully. When we are young we never stop to think of all the misery we put up in our folks. Hindsite is one of those things we don't realize until much further down the road. Well done-
Wow Milly! This brought a tear to my eye. I'm sure this poem brought his mum so much comfort at what must have been such a devastating time for her.
Beautifully written and rhymed. Heartfelt and poignant. Amazing! Xx