Comments : Spirit Free - Message To Mum

  • 4 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Such nice piece. Easy and so smooth to read.

  • 4 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Sad to read, Milly but an inspirational message to us all at the same time.

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Milly, a sad write but you really wrote this beautifully. When we are young we never stop to think of all the misery we put up in our folks. Hindsite is one of those things we don't realize until much further down the road. Well done-

  • 4 months ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful piece!

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    This is so heartbreaking !!!

  • 6 days ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Wow Milly! This brought a tear to my eye. I'm sure this poem brought his mum so much comfort at what must have been such a devastating time for her.
    Beautifully written and rhymed. Heartfelt and poignant. Amazing! Xx
    =^.^=

  • 6 days ago

    by Joanna Allanson

    Great poem. I think it is a sad poem but actually in many ways quite uplifting and offers hope.

  • 6 days ago

    by Free verse

    Milly, you made it heavenly with your words.
    Perfect rhyming, full of emotions, a pinch of sadness and an optimistic end.