Comments : Hold Me Down

  • 6 months ago

    by Alec

    This is beautiful. With all the posts about the PnQ ball I almost missed it. Well rhymed and without losing its messege

  • 5 months ago

    by Em

    In my opinion I think it's beautiful just the way it is.

    Take care

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    I really like where you are going with this, flows wonderfully.