Comments : OVUA

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Well hello stranger, hope you're ok.

    1/ Well opening up your heart like this from a memory unleashed can some times be good other times well mainly bad because in my opinion it opens a whole can of nasties. I love the word usage here.

    2/ I like the empathsis on you and mars here because to me the you is a distant memory and mars is linked there by being distant too.. my interpretation anyway but yes we can all grow love when we want to.

    3/ I love the imagery here of your heart writing our Mon amoures (love that too)

    4/ love the way their smiles seen as sexually arousing, maybe I read more into that than I should have.

    Oooosh that ending? (I have to say I googled this) and its French do goodbye, yes I know I'm terrible at languages lol.

    Nice to see you back,
    Em

    • 4 months ago

      by The Po whet

      Em,it hurts that you're calling me a stranger (lol).Thanks for the comment.I'll will myself not to disappear again.

    • 4 months ago

      by Em

      I just haven't seen you around recently but hey we have life's too live, just hoping things are going good for you :) take care

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hi. Nice to meet you. Em said most of what I wanted to say. The whole poem has this aura of love mixed with goodbye. Bittersweet. Great write.

    • 4 months ago

      by The Po whet

      Hello and a pleasure to meet you too.Thanks for the comment.I appreciate it

  • 4 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Blast those dastardly women, Moe. They do seem to say that word with an unnerving regularity, don't they?

    Great write. All the very best,

    Ben

    • 4 months ago

      by The Po whet

      Hello Ben,...yeah sometimes girls give us trouble when chasing... The chase is always sweet when she's worth it though.Thanks for the comment.