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  • 4 months ago

    by Ren

    This is a great piece, full of so much emotion!

    "Afraid of being just another notch in the bed post." ---this line is so profound!

    Well done!

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh. Tugged at my heartstrings a few times. Emotions rising and falling, hmmm, this is excellent!

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Mpm firstly its good to see another write by you especially one done so fantastically.

    1/ I must say I think we are all afraid of love especially if we have previously been hurt and to be a one nightstand, that's hard.

    2/ wow, that's harsh and again one thing mainly us women are afraid of becoming but hey such? is life.

    3/ Oh wow. Love this because it shows this person truly means alot to you and you feel like a nothing compared to them and though you love them you just can't figure them out.

    4/ That endings on point and I totally hear you.

    Em

    • 4 months ago

      by Missy Panda MayheM

      Thanks Em. I'm going to start posting more now that I'm done school.

      I love that you broke down each section of it. Really helped to show me how strongly conveyed each hidden message was and that really helps me with my writings.

      Lexi