Comments : One more night

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautifully sad.

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Fredy, I haven't logged on for a while so it's lovely to come back to such a well rhymed and well written piece of poetry.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 5 months ago

    by Lvi

    the sun hides likes a kid in trouble
    the moon starts a ballad

    ^^wonderful and creative.

    Beautiful visuals throughout!

  • 5 months ago

    by Kereen

    Beautiful absolutely artistic

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Lovely piece of writing

    Michael :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Em

    Though? I can feel the yearning/wanting in this piece it's lovely even if quite melancholic