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by Dana Jun 21, 2017
Love, romance /
Ink bled as I wrote what's on the inside,
Soul was crushed I couldn't hide.
Everything seemed to be perfect.
In the end, it left me wounded.
Once I was a fool,
I let my heart fall
To the man I thought was mine.
I was wrong, everything was a lie.
This is a beautifully written piece with the emotions of heartbreak hanging heavily on every word. Although it hurts when it's broken, the heart truly is such a resilient little thing! Much love and healing to you, and welcome to the site :)
by Ben Pickard
A warm welcome to the site, Dana.
It seems you, like so many here, have been wronged in love if this poem is any evidence.. This is a perfect place to vent and air our feelings!
Well done, keep writing and all the best,
Hi, Dana, welcome to the site, kababayan! What a raw and honest write! Totally relatable, I think we have all been there, done that. Lovely first poem!
by Meena Krish