Hi, Dana, welcome to the site, kababayan! What a raw and honest write! Totally relatable, I think we have all been there, done that. Lovely first poem!

A warm welcome to the site, Dana.

It seems you, like so many here, have been wronged in love if this poem is any evidence.. This is a perfect place to vent and air our feelings!

Well done, keep writing and all the best,

Ben

This is a beautifully written piece with the emotions of heartbreak hanging heavily on every word. Although it hurts when it's broken, the heart truly is such a resilient little thing! Much love and healing to you, and welcome to the site :)