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  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    I like the simplicity (if that's the correct term here) of this because it's well done and not so in your face so to speak.

    1/ So you have been watching this lady from afar and she seems to want the same things as you do which is always good and even though she doesn't see her own worth you do but in all honesty who sees their own worth?

    2/ This is just wonderfully beautiful and the rhymes on point.

    3/ Aww. So sad but fantastic.

    Em

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Sweet. :-)

    • 3 months ago

      by Ren

      Agreed! Wonderful write! Well done!