A warm welcome to the site, Erin.

This is a great first post from you, drenched in wonderful imagery.

Well done, keep writing and take care,

Ben

Welcome to the site, Erin.

Great imagery and the sadness over the lost love is felt. I agree with Ben, this is a great first post.

First of all, welcome to the site :) this is a gorgeous first write by you! Like Ben said, the imagery in this is absolutely wonderful. Well done! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!