Comments : That Last Drag

  • 5 months ago

    by Ren

    This is an excellently written piece, well done!

  • 5 months ago

    by Maher

    Agreed, I really like this. Punctuation is a little choppy, but who cares, the story and imagery is great. I can smell and taste that lit cigarette from here, and feel the butt of it collapse under my foot.

    Thank you for sharing this with us all :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Em

    Absolutely fantastic!!!!

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I agree with them. This is absolutely great! It's like I am in the room watching this person smoking this cigarette and thinking deeply...and I kinda twitched when he stomped it under his feet. The feels.