Comments : senryu #1

  • 3 months ago

    by k.won

    thanks moss girl.i went and correct this one

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is captivating and heart-touching, Aisha.

    • 3 months ago

      by k.won

      thanks mel

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A great little senryu with a nice touch of wisdom sprinkled over the top.

    Well written,

    Ben

    • 3 months ago

      by k.won

      thank you