Comments : I Can't Wake Up

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, this is beautiful, Jess! I love it. So relatable and this is excellently written. I love the emphasis at the end.

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    Powerful!!

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Jessica,

    I'm so used to reading your imaginative formed fusions that it's almost a shock to see you write in 'simple' free verse! However, I do like this dark little write; well done.

    Take care,

    Ben