heart touching lines

This is just superb! Clever and so excellently written. Your rhythm is just...no words. :-)

Your writing is extraordinary!! I mean...seriously!! This is amazing!! Fantastic write!

Just WOW!

And I am now filled with hayfever like never before.. this is too relatable!

*double post*

I am left speechless again you have a real way with words that draws you in and spits you back out (in a good way)

Holy shiiii.

Judging comments: I'm not quite sure what I can even say about this poem, as nothing will do it justice. Reading this aloud in the tone I am pulling makes it dramatic and breathy, over the top and beautiful. She is your drug, something you crave and want and sometimes talk yourself into needing. I love the way you said her code executes in numbers of six... that whole stanza had it. The whole poem, the images flashing in my mind - this poem is really brilliant.