Comments : Grandpa’s Tomatoes (Limerick)

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    My first try at Limericks. This is at maximum 10/10/7/7/10.

  • 1 year ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    What a great rhyme used in this poem. Salute to you. How nice poem it is !

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Funny stuff, Mel. I was teaching my kids about limericks the other day and getting them to write their own to some highly amusing results!
    All the best as ever,
    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thanks, Ben. I think that limericks are great for kids. It's really fun coz they can exercise their creativity while being trained to abide by the rhyme scheme. And wow, they have a great teacher! ;-)

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Miss Limerick Mel :0
    What a lovely first attempt, really enjoyed this funny little piece

    Michael :)

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      It's a relief to know you enjoyed the piece, Michael. The first attempt did scare me. Hehe. Thanks, Michael!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    (<3)^double click!!

    Well done beautiful Lady!! :)

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      My dear Cowgirl! :-) I am trying to be funny. Hehe.

  • 1 year ago

    by Sai

    I couldn't comment the first time I read this. Just wanted to say I really love this. How you've captured a moment that will last a long time in this little poem. Nostalgic and humorous as well.

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hello, Sai. It is nostalgic for me too as my inspiration in writing this is my grandpa's garden which he is very protective of. Thank you for this very heart-warming comment. :-)