Comments : You are my poetry

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ohhh...be still my heart!

    "You aren't just the bright light of my days
    Or the beautiful purple in my sunsets,
    You my love,
    Are the flow, rhythm, and harmony
    Of my poetry."

    Okay. I am officially on the moon. :-)

    Another truly beautiful write, BT!

  • 3 months ago

    by Ren

    Yes! I very much agree with Mel! This is truly a beautiful write! Well done!

  • 1 month ago

    by Lucifer

    Love really is the flow, rhythm and harmony of our life.

    Beautiful poem,,!

  • 1 month ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Thank you!

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is lovely, BT. When we are in love, we often cannot find the right words to say for all kinds of reasons. We are nervous, excited, scared but rarely...sensible, lol. I have to say, the last five lines are wonderful.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben