Comments : Mere Genetics

  • 11 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh, wow,this just blew me away. You have beautifully expressed another great message in this one! I love the structure, the rhyme, the flow. Very well done.

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    This is well rhymed and different to pieces I have read in awhile. The sentiment is lovely to,that ending is inspiring and true