My nan and yours would have got on like a house on fire lol they seem like two peas in a pod

Your gran sure is an amazing woman basing on your words. My gran is fighting for her life as of the moment. Thank you for this beautiful, heart-felt piece.

I feel like this piece started very strongly in it's language, time, and content, but then started to lose some of that power as it went on. The rhythm - for me - also felt quite staccato.

However, as with all your pieces, there was a great sense of a person. Your poems are always personal and emotional, with a childlike quality.