Comments : Father

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Dill,
    I love rhyming poetry but as your footnote alludes to, it has to have a point otherwise it just comes across as contrived and forced and that is not poetic. This is. I found the whole piece a real pleasure to read, both in its warmth, content and flow. Your father sounds like a special man.

    All the very best to you,
    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Dill

      Thanks man. I really appreciate the encouragement. It means a lot considering the fact that I know that you yourself are a poet and thus know what you're talking about.