Comments : Longing for freedom

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is so vividly written. Imagery is outstanding.

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I take it that the chains and prison are a metaphor for the kind of sadness that has us imprisoned in our minds but physically as well, when we literally feel like we cannot move or do a thing.
    Anyway, as Mel points out, the descriptive writing in this is wonderful to read.

    All the best,

    Ben