Comments : Dessert (Form - Senryu)

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Clever, Augustus.

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oppps. Clever, indeed.

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Now I have to agree, a very clever thought provoked piece :)
    well done

    Michael

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    Augustus - I have to disagree this is very sexist and I really dislike it lol - joking aside, this is pretty powerful but women can say the exact same thing because those waiters dress well and some are hunks (haha) but to be honest I'd much prefer the food they bring than anything else unless a hugs on offer hehe

    Powerful, thought provoking piece which is well laid out.

    Em x

    • 2 months ago

      by Augustus Black

      Well, Miss Em or I should say Miss Em x. hehe

      If this poem has turned you on, then best of luck for your hunk. lol

      Anyway, thanks for the lovely comment.